Saturday, February 18, 2012

Never Gonna Stop - SEASON FINALE

Thank you guys so much for being patient, and waiting for these to come out…
This show never could have made it this far without you : )
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(Everyone stares out of the window, at a huge abandoned factory, with no other buildings around.)
Cody: Well….
Ari: (whispers.) Um…is this the bad side of town?
Ally: I think that might be the least of our worries right now, Ari.
Courtney: Let’s go.
(Courtney and Ally step out of the car first, followed by everyone else.)
PJ: Uh…how do we get in?
Courtney: (crosses her arms.) Maybe that’s the first challenge.
Dylan: (smiles at Courtney.) Maybe we should all split up and look for an entrance.
Ally: No way. We all HAVE to stick together, or else something might happen.
Mackenzie: What if they have a back door? I mean, don’t even super-creepy businesses have back doors?
Courtney: You know, she might be right…
Cody: Let’s go check.
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(Inside the factory, in a tiny room.)
Carly: (sleeping.)
Hope: (wakes up, and looks around the room.)
(The room is as small as a closet, made of metal, with a calendar, the only thing on the walls.)
Hope: (whispers to Carly urgently.) Carly - wake up, they have us in a different room!
Carly: (wakes up, and looks around.) I don’t like this, Hope.
Hope: Neither do I, much - but look! There’s a calendar on the wall -
Carly: (gasps.) Hope - Hope, look, there’s a note on today..! It says…it’s….
Hope: (whispers.) Rescue day…
Carly: No, it’s not that…look what it says underneath, in tiny letters…
(They both look at each other.)
Carly: (whispers.) It says…death day.
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(Back outside the factory, where it’s getting dark outside, and is five minutes away from 8:00.)
Mackenzie: (shuffles from side to side.) I have to peeeeee.
Courtney: (whispers angrily.) Well, why didn’t you go before we left?
Mackenzie: (whispers angrily back.) How was I supposed to know - ?!
(Everyone looks around the back of the building for a door.)
Cody: (hit’s the wall, and realizes it sounds hollow.) You guys, come here.
Mackenzie: Yes! Cody, you’re a genius!
Cody: (smiles.) Could you tell my mom that?
Ally: (peels back the wall, and opens the door.)
PJ: Here we go.
(Everyone links hands and arms, and walks through the door.)
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(In Carly and Hope’s cell.)
Hope: (paces around the room, thinking.) If today is death day -
Carly: (groans.) - oh, please stop saying death day -
Hope: - fine, but anyways, if it is today….and if it’s also rescue day…
Carly: (jumps up, thinking.) Then…that would mean, Ally would come to save me, Courtney would come to save you, and once they’re in the building…
Hope: (stares grimly at Carly.) Boom.
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(Once everyone steps in the hallway, the door slides closed behind them, and the lights go out.)
Courtney: (runs back to the door, pounding on it.)
Dylan: (takes Courtney’s hand, and pulls her back to where everyone is freaking out in the darkness.)
Ally: We need a plan, everyone.
Austin: What I think, is that we should all stick together - and not let go of each other.
(Everyone grabs hands again.)
(Suddenly, a small square of light appears in the wall.)
PJ: What the - ?
Voice: Please, Ally Dawson, Courtney Hart, insert your credit cards in the light.
Ally: (trembling, puts her and Courtney’s cards into the light.)
(The cards evaporate into thin air.)
Austin: (whispers.) Freaky…
Voice: Thank you. You have 30 minutes to find your children.
Voice: If you do not make it to the heart of this building, where Carly and Hope are….
….this building goes down.
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(Back with Carly and Hope.)
Carly: Maybe if we yell loud enough, they could hear us.
Hope: (shrugs.)
Carly: (stands up, and starts pounding on the walls.) ALLY! ALLY!
Hope: (stands up too.) COURTNEY! SIS!
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(Everyone walks along the dark hallway, until a box of light slides open to their right.)
Courtney: Should we go through?
Ally: I guess we kind of have to.
(They all go through, evaporating one by one.)
Ally: (sees the room they’re in, and hugs Austin.)
Austin: (hugs her back, staring around in horror.)
(The room is pitch black, with hundreds of doors of light.)
Courtney: (starts to cry.)
Dylan: How are we ever going to find them?
(Everyone starts talking at once.)
Mackenzie: (screams.) Everyone - SHUT UP AND LISTEN!
(There are shouts and banging coming from somewhere in the huge room.)
Courtney: (gasps, and runs down the hallway.) I think they’re down this way!
Ally: (walks through a door, and sees Carly and Hope.)
Carly: (sees Ally, runs up, and hugs her, crying.)
(Everyone walks through the door, and Courtney runs up to hug Hope.)
Voice: You have found Carly and Hope. You are successful. You will be able to return home.
Mackenzie: (starts crying, and kisses Cody, right in front of everyone.)
(Everyone hugs each other, crying.)
(They exit the building, with Carly and Hope, back to the hotel.)
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(Back at the hotel, where everyone is calling home and packing up.)
Ally: (calling her mom.) Hey....sorry for being missing for the past few days.
Ally's Mom: (smiles with relief.) You know, honey, with you and Courtney, all your friends? When we were looking for you all?
Ally: Yeah?
Ally's Mom: We were never gonna stop.
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Thank you guys so much for making my first show a success…but this doesn’t have to be over.

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